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Week 10 – Blog

Inquiry: Consider yourself as a visual consumer. Find a website/brochure/magazine you like and reflect on what it appeals to you. Write a short review of the site/product on your blog, making reference to points addressed in this week’s study materials.

As a current student studying digital media, I have many interests in design and photography; however I also have a passion for Volkswagen Beetles. For the final task of the blog assessment, I have selected the magazine ‘VW Magazine Australia (VWMA)’. VWMA is available every 3 months and purely dedicated to Volkswagen enthusiasts.

VWMA Features

Figure 1: Features                                                                                                               Source: VVMA (2015) pg. 3

VWMA is a male-dominated publication. The design principles are evident; however, differ as opposed to what may be found in female-orientated or non-motoring publication. The overall visual principles ensure every page consists of images and text. The purpose of this magazine is to promote like-minded business through advertising, only Volkswagen classic car sales, promoting events, real life stories, and so forth (see figure 1).

VVMA Herman's Excellent Adventure/ Platinum Trimmings

Figure 2: Herman’s Excellent Adventure/ Platinum Trimmings                                                                                    Source: VVMA (2015) pg. 46-47

While the pages may appear inconsistent at a first glance, every page layout coexists with one another. Each page is purposely divided by two or three columns, which divide the content and images. Text is presented separately in justified alignment, whereas images are enclosed within a box/ border. Advertising material is revealed every several pages or combined with a story. These can range from one ad to a combination of ads per page. Aside from advertising material, the text remains consistent in font, size and colour. This is achieved by keeping the background white and applying black text for optimum readability (see figure 2).

VWMA Bling Bug

Figure 3: Bling Bug                                                                                                                                                                  Source: VVMA (2015) pg. 64-65

Colour is a very important element when creating a visual principle. For example, (figure 3) consists of a two-page spread, featuring this custom Volkswagen Beetle. This beautifully restored orange and white bug is the feature for this story; therefore, one large image has been stretched across both pages. The smaller images are presented with a thin white border to offset the element of white space. The title is positioned in the top right hand corner, using the same colour orange to draw the reader’s attention to the text below.


References

Ames, K 2015, COMM11007 Media writing week 10: impact of design: study guide, CQUniversity, Rockhampton.


Practical: Review your blog. You should review it for visual impact and technical accuracy from a language perspective.

The final blog… what an overwhelming 10 weeks it has been! Looking forward to the break, as I’m sure everyone will be. I hope you have enjoyed reading my blogs and look forward to some feedback. Until next time…

a. Is the layout clean and easy to read? Have you used headings in a way that attracts attention to key points? Is white space used appropriately? Reflect on this on your blog.

The layout of my blogs is clean and easy to read. The background has remained white with the use of black font, as a good rule of thumb for readability. The headings are simple and are presented in capital letters. The activities content is written in bold with the addition of the questions that have been applied in both bold and italics; this attracts the attention to the key points and remainder of the content. The overall white space is consistent with the use of images and spacing between text.

b. Have you completed all the tasks? Check that you have completed all blog requirements and ensure that you have responded to all weekly requirements. Check this against the ‘Blog Task Requirements’ on page two of this activity sheet.

The Blog Task Requirements checklist was beneficial and I strongly believe that I have completed all the requirements for this assignment. At first I had actually forgotten to check what was required for the technical aspect for blog nine, I assumed that nothing was required as the quiz exercise had been completed.

I chose to incorporate both inquiry and practical activities into one blog for ease of navigation and readability. The technical aspect in regards to quizzes one to eight were combined as a separate blog post, which can be easily found as per the label on my WordPress account.

c. Reflect on the blogging tasks. Write a few sentences on your views of this assessment. What were your major challenges and how did you overcome these? Was it too hard/too easy/about right? Has it helped improve your writing?

This assessment has been one of the most overwhelming tasks, yet I feel confident in my work. I have really grasped the concept of blogging and have become quite familiar with using WordPress.

The major challenges were ensuring I stayed up to date with the blog activities. It seems easy in theory, one blog per week for 10 weeks but can be seen as a challenge. Especially when combined with other full time studies, work and life; however, I applied myself and set a list of weekly tasks using a whiteboard that I crossed off as I completed. This provided instant gratification and supported my persistence throughout the weeks.

This assessment has definitely helped to improve my writing, which will support my future studies. The tasks themselves were not overly difficult; it was more an issue of time management and prioritising. This final blog post has proven this task to be achievable.


Technical: Blog review for technical errors

a. Review your blog against the ‘Blog Writing Checklist’ on page 3 of this activity sheet.

Call me old school but I find printing and physically marking off to still be a valuable tool in this modern world.

b. Reflect on this briefly on your blog – Did you find the questions difficult? Did find many issues?

The questions were very informative and provide a clear explanation, which I found very helpful. I tend to polish my work continuously, however I did find several minor errors in the first proofread. The ‘read your work aloud’ technique was definitely helpful; but I think I have re-read my work adequately.

Week 9 – Blog

Inquiry: Review two different examples of curation: consider the differences. If the purpose and audience is similar, how does the way the information is structured and presented make a difference to the way it might be received?

There are two different types of curation to be reviewed: One is data-driven presented by The 25 Best Hotels of 2015 and the other is editor-written presented by Gold Standard Hotels. Immediately there is a difference that can be seen between the two.

The data-driven curation is aesthetically pleasing, consisting of several visual aids such as images, variety of text, both in colour and style. This years award logo has been presented at the top of the page and reoccurs throughout the site, labelling it a recommended website. The immediate presentation consists of one large photo followed by three smaller photos of the Top 25 Hotels of the World, accompanied with a brief quote about the hotel. Furthermore a link is provided that directs you to another page to view a collection of reviews. The ease of Navigation is also consistent and labelled effectively.

The editor-written curation is disorganised, cluttered and overwhelming. Only one image is being presented that are mainly exterior photographs. This has minimal benefit, the main interest and the marketing for this website is accommodation. There is also too much of a variation between fonts, combined with large blocks of content that it becomes difficult to read and navigate. The information has also been provided in pounds, and provides no currency conversion. This will be an issue for most Australian residents, prompting them to leave the page in order to obtain the required information.

In conclusion, it is clear that the data-driven curation is the most effective as opposed to the editor-written curation. The data-driven curation reinforces what people want when conducting a search and reinforces a valued and respectable site. The editor-written curation is the complete opposite, with no positive outcome. Overseas travel can cost thousands and I do not believe many would invest with this particular site.


References

Trip Advisor Australia 2015, Best Hotels of 2015, viewed 20 September 2015, http://www.tripadvisor.com.au/TravelersChoice-Hotels-g1

Conde Nast Traveller 2015, Gold Standard Hotels 2015, viewed 20 September 2015, http://www.cntraveller.com/awards/the-gold-list/gold-standard-hotels-2015/viewall


Practical: Review a peer’s Storify submission and ask the following questions: Who do you think is the audience? What did you learn about the event? What else (if anything) could be included that would make the story more interesting or have more impact? If the structure is confusing, how could it be improved? What do you like about the story?

I chose to review the student Heidi Petith on her story about the Twilight City Street Party, held in Mackay.

Twilight City Street Party

I am a resident of Mackay and was only able to briefly attend the event. I had little knowledge of the overall event, therefore became instantly engrossed with the information and collection of tweets being presented.

Petith targets a variety of audiences, in particular of the Mackay region. The event itself was aimed towards Mackay residents and local business owners. The additional interest of the Mackay Regional Council and construction workers were also of value in her story. This story was achieved by the in-depth visual and written aids of the following:

  • Factual information and figures;
  • Event organiser;
  • Local businesses, in particular one longstanding business;
  • Roadwork constructions;
  • Statement from the Mayor;
  • Stall owners;
  • Restaurants introducing International flavours;
  • Animating Mackay Spaces Up project;
  • Community involvement;
  • Live entertainment;
  • General public interest;
  • Re-tweets;

Without this network of community supporters, this event would not have been possible. Those who know of or are residents of Mackay do not have the same opportunities and events like the bigger cities. This community event had such an impact on Mackay; it is likely it would have gained interest from other small town communities within proximity.

Petith structured her story well, presenting a good combination of photographs, video and relevant text. She focused on one particular business that was initially mentioned and then revisited by the end of her story. The collection of direct quotes, provided authenticity to her work revealing her inner journalist. The addition of a past photograph really reinforced the progress that had lead to such an incredible community event.

The structure is presented in a clear format and is interesting to the reader. I feel the information is appropriate to be positioned above the tweet, to introduce the topic in more detail. Personally I would have liked to see an image of Carrolls Newsagency, with or without the fourth owners Juanita and Darryl Shepperson to really engage with the content being presented, as they are a main feature of your story. The selfie competition also looked really fun and I would have loved to know more or seen additional images, especially as it is such a big part of today’s culture.

Overall I really enjoyed reading the finer details about the Twilight City Street Party, especially as it was a local event. I wish I had had the opportunity to explore the event more; hopefully there will be another next year.


References

Petith, H 2015, Twilight City Street Party a Bittersweet Celebration, viewed 20 September 2015, https://storify.com/Heidi_Petith/twilight-street-party-a-bittersweet-celebration


Technical: Active and Passive Writing

a. Complete the test at http://www.businesswriting.com/tests/activepassive.htm

The test took approximately 30 minutes to complete.

b. Reflect on this briefly on your blog – Did you find the questions difficult? Did you have any problems in specific areas?

The questions were not difficult, however I can see from my results that I need to improve on distinguishing the change between passive voice and active voice. Results are below…

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References

BusinessWriting 2015, Passive and active voice, viewed 17 September 2015,http://www.businesswriting.com/tests/activepassive.htm

Weeks 1-8 Quiz Reviews

Blog Activity: Week 1 Quiz

You don’t need to do any study for this quiz. You simply need to observe and comprehend.

Attempt State Marks / 8.00 Grade / 100.00 Review
1 FinishedSubmitted Wednesday, 15 July 2015, 4:47 PM 8.00 100.00 Review

Quiz 1 required one attempt to pass.

This quiz required no study, only observation and a keen eye. It was relatively straight forward taking approximately 10 minutes to complete. The feedback supported my answers.


Blog Activity: Week 2 Quiz

Review Chapter 2, English for Journalists (Wynford Hicks) prior to completing this quiz.

Attempt State Marks / 10.00 Grade / 100.00 Review
1 FinishedSubmitted Monday, 27 July 2015, 9:59 PM 7.00 70.00 Review
2 FinishedSubmitted Monday, 27 July 2015, 10:03 PM 10.00 100.00 Review

Quiz 2 required two attempts to pass. The first attempt, I failed on question one, nine and ten.

Question one confused me on identifying the three basic tenses. Question two was in regards to verbs, which are not a strong point. Question ten I changed my answer at the last minute, as I was unsure, resulting in an incorrect answer. Sometimes you have to trust your first instinct. I feel I have gained a greater understanding of verbs and nouns.


Blog Activity: Week 3 Quiz

Review Chapter 3, English for Journalists (Wynford Hicks) prior to completing this quiz.

Attempt State Marks / 12.00 Grade / 100.00 Review
1 FinishedSubmitted Monday, 3 August 2015, 1:04 PM 7.00 58.33 Review
2 FinishedSubmitted Monday, 3 August 2015, 1:07 PM 12.00 100.00 Review

Quiz 3 required two attempts to pass. The first attempt, I failed on questions one, six, seven, eleven and twelve.

Question one confused me with a section I had read in the textbook which prompted an incorrect answer. Question six was a play on words, the common was redundant which I can see now. Question seven really pushed my understanding of the use of I and me in a sentence. Question eleven provided a better understanding of using ‘you’ and ‘one’ in the same sentence. Finally question twelve was in relation to verbs and nouns which is very much learning process.


Blog Activity: Week 4 Quiz

Review Chapter 4, English for Journalists (Wynford Hicks) prior to completing this quiz.

Attempt State Marks / 10.00 Grade / 100.00 Review
1 FinishedSubmitted Monday, 3 August 2015, 1:19 PM 9.00 90.00 Review
2 FinishedSubmitted Monday, 3 August 2015, 1:21 PM 10.00 100.00 Review

Quiz 4 required two attempts to pass. The first attempt, I failed on question three only.

Question three I believe to have interpreted the example in the textbook as the correct answer when in fact it was the opposite. The feedback has reinforced the mistake which is easily identifiable now.


Blog Activity: Week 5 Quiz A

Review Chapter 7, English for Journalists (Wynford Hicks) prior to completing this quiz.

Attempt State Marks / 10.00 Grade / 100.00 Review
1 FinishedSubmitted Thursday, 27 August 2015, 11:41 AM 8.00 80.00 Review
2 FinishedSubmitted Thursday, 27 August 2015, 11:43 AM 8.00 80.00 Review
3 FinishedSubmitted Thursday, 27 August 2015, 11:45 AM 10.00 100.00 Review

Quiz 5a required three attempts to pass.

In the first attempt, question four was the most difficult. The feedback on the review provided the explanation as to why the punctuation was incorrect. This will definitely be something I will need to pay attention to in the future. Question 7 was accidently left blank, I must have missed it or the mark didn’t register causing an incomplete score.

The second attempt left me with the same outcome of 8/10. On the review I noticed I answered question 7 in question 8 therefore again caused an incomplete as well as an incorrect score.


Blog Activity: Week 5 Quiz B

Review Chapter 11, English for Journalists (Wynford Hicks) prior to completing this quiz.

Attempt State Marks / 10.00 Grade / 100.00 Review
1 FinishedSubmitted Thursday, 27 August 2015, 12:39 PM 5.00 50.00 Review
2 FinishedSubmitted Thursday, 27 August 2015, 12:54 PM 10.00 100.00 Review

Quiz 5b required three attempts to pass. I failed on questions three, six, seven, eight and nine.

Question three I selected the numerical figure assuming this was correct, however this is not to be used when starting a sentence. Question six was technically incorrect however is still an accurate sentence. Again the use of spelled numbers is the more accurate. Question seven was a selection error. Question eight I had contemplated on selecting ‘all of the above’ yet had chosen what I thought to be the most accurate. Finally question nine I was definitely an error in judgement after re-reading the question and feedback.


Blog Activity: Week 6 Quiz A

Review Chapter 6, English for Journalists (Wynford Hicks) prior to completing this quiz.

Attempt State Marks / 10.00 Grade / 100.00 Review
1 FinishedSubmitted Thursday, 27 August 2015, 1:19 PM 8.00 80.00 Review
2 FinishedSubmitted Thursday, 27 August 2015, 1:50 PM 10.00 100.00 Review

Quiz 6a required two attempts to pass. I failed on questions three and ten.

Question three I immediately realised I had selected the incorrect answer; I am quite familiar with the use of the word ‘however’. Question ten confused me a little with using an apostrophe, which was explained in the feedback.


Blog Activity: Week 6 Quiz B

Review Chapter 6, English for Journalists (Wynford Hicks) prior to completing this quiz. (This is the second week we’ll be focusing on punctuation.)

Attempt State Marks / 10.00 Grade / 100.00 Review
1 FinishedSubmitted Thursday, 27 August 2015, 2:10 PM 5.00 50.00 Review
2 FinishedSubmitted Thursday, 27 August 2015, 2:30 PM 10.00 100.00 Review

Quiz 6b required two attempts to pass. I failed on questions four, five, six, eight and nine.

Question four I thought I had answered correctly as per information found in the textbook however revealed incorrect. The feedback suggested it was better to use typography, which is understandable. Question five I really felt that ‘Thomases’ was incorrect but discovered the ‘e’ was acceptable to use. Question six I did struggle to find information clearly identifying this in the textbook. There was mention in relation to the use of dot points, however, actually indicated something has removed from the sentence. Question eight prompted me to identify the error with ‘middle-distance’. I had selected incorrectly, one of the terms related and the other did not which can be clearly seen now. Finally question nine was a confusion between identifying the apostrophe and collective noun.


 Blog Activity: Week 7 Quiz A

Review Chapter 5, English for Journalists (Wynford Hicks) prior to completing this quiz.

Attempt State Marks / 10.00 Grade / 100.00 Review
1 FinishedSubmitted Thursday, 27 August 2015, 3:06 PM 9.00 90.00 Review
2 FinishedSubmitted Thursday, 27 August 2015, 3:10 PM 10.00 100.00 Review

Quiz 7a required two attempts to pass. I failed on questions six, seven, eight and nine.

I second-guessed all of these answers. Question six I read the three common mistakes of misspelled word, however interpreted the answer as only being for shorter words that sound the same. Question seven I had confusion with differentiating the meaning between a noun and verb. Question eight again was a misinterpretation of what I had read in the book. Finally question nine was somewhat confusing selecting the correct context.


Blog Activity: Week 7 Quiz B 

Review Chapter 8, English for Journalists (Wynford Hicks) prior to completing this quiz.

Attempt State Marks / 10.00 Grade / 100.00 Review
1 FinishedSubmitted Thursday, 27 August 2015, 3:06 PM 9.00 90.00 Review
2 FinishedSubmitted Thursday, 27 August 2015, 3:10 PM 10.00 100.00 Review

Quiz 7b required two attempts to pass. I failed on question three only.

I was really unsure about the answer for this question due to the lack of information found in the textbook. Therefore I assumed an answer of ‘all of the above’ which was incorrect. The feedback supported the explanation of the correct answer.


References

Hicks, W 2013, English for journalists, Routledge, New York.

Week 8 – Blog

Inquiry: Think about your interests. Find a social media networking site that is most suitable and aligned with those interests. Think about how you might use this network personally, and then how you might use it professionally. Reflect on this on your blog.

I have a strong passion for photography; therefore have chosen the social media networking site Flickr. The diversity of this website promotes personal use, however is also very acceptable for professional use.

Personal use can relate to sharing of photographs that appeal to a vast audience. Photography is a form of art and we all have the right to express ourselves. Self-related personal photographs, for example, something that may be posted on Facebook or Instagram may not be appropriate for this site. In addition, intimate or explicit photographs are also not the intention of this website.

Professional use presents many positive opportunities when using this website. There are a number of professions in the field of design that could benefit from this site. Flickr provides a direct portal to millions of sources and vice-versa. The option to upload you own photographs could also become a profitable marketing campaign.

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Figure 1: Flickr logo                         Source: Flicker, viewed 17 September 2015, https://www.flickr.com/about/goodies/


Practical: You are the technology writer for your local paper. Write a 300 word review of the social media network you selected as your Inquiry task. Write the review as though you are recommending (or otherwise) the social media platform for someone else.

Flickr has been a wonderful discovery and more recently becoming my favourite social media network to use. Flickr (pronounced Flicker) is an image hosting website that was created in 2005. The popular site enables users to upload, access, organise, edit and share photographs from any device, anywhere in the world. The focus of this website is to influence a generalised audience, therefore it is recommended that photographs be not of an explicit nature. Animals and sceneries appear to be the most common subjects, however, the notion of people in images are still very prominent.

You wont need an account to view and access the images, however you will need an account to upload content to the site. Flickr also offers three types of accounts to get you started, what’s better is they are all free! People often lose precious memories through the use of hard drives, USB devices and old school technologies such as negatives and developed photographs. Flickr promotes a secure database for all your photographs, as promoted “The home for all your photos”.

Getting started is super easy with a quick sign up that instantly gives you the option to automatically back up your device with a free 1,000GB of photo storage. This site is also connected to creating blogs known as Flickr Blogs, which further can be linked with other social media accounts such as Facebook and Twitter. The site is a versatile, practical and valuable system to a selection of users, especially to those with an interest in the digital media industry and/or artistry industry.

Since joining recently, I have spent some time exploring the site and absolutely blown away with the skill of some of these photographs. I have not yet uploaded my own content, but I will be exploring my account further soon.


References

Flickr 2015, Explore, viewed 17 September 2015, https://www.flickr.com/

Week 7 – Blog

Practical: This week, it’s time to reflect on your assessment and make adjustments to it as required based on some of the information you have learned.

a. Review your items for Assessment 1 which is due at the end of this week and correct any spelling, style, and punctuation errors.

Assessment one felt a little daunting to begin with, however I quickly became intrigued by the content. I personally know several people within the journalism industry; so I began reading their articles and following them on Twitter. I then applied this learning with my newly found knowledge obtained from the textbook, weekly readings and the quizzes into assessment one to bring out my inner journalist.

b. Now review Assessment 1 items against the Marking Key checklist linked to the Resources section on this website. On your blog, reflect on this experience – Did you pick up all issues on your first proofread? Were there many? Do you think you corrected them all? Was it helpful having a checklist? Do you think it will make a difference to your overall result?

I constantly ‘polish’ my work, therefore, there were little issues in the initial proof read. Once I felt I had completed the assignment, which was a few days prior to the submission date, I took that time to focus my attention on other assignments so I could return with a fresh mind for the final proof read.

The checklist was very helpful as it’s good to be aware of what the marker is looking for and what is required if you want to get that higher mark. The mark I graded myself was somewhat high, however I feel it was a deserving grade for the quality of work provided. I look forward to receiving the result from my lecturer; hopefully it will be a similar grade.


Inquiry: Visit the website of the IUCN-SSC Crocodile Specialist Group (CSG) at http://www.iucncsg.org/ and review a newsletter.

Crocodile

Figure 1: Crocodile                                                                                                                                                                          Source: Tom Dacey, Facebook, viewed 2 September 2015, https://www.facebook.com/220994674660797/photos/a.258002590960005.59678.220994674660797/502608646499397/?type=1&theater

Locating the newsletter publications link within this website was a challenge in itself. Regardless of the improper layout, I selected what appeared to be the most recent newsletter, volume 34 No.2 April-June 2015. It is evident that these newsletters are released every three months.

i. What kinds of stories are in the newsletter?

This newsletter consisted of 44 pages in total and covered an abundance of stories that appeared to flow from one to the other. The information was difficult to navigate and the content was overwhelming to read. The use of images were definitely needed, however, I found the captions written underneath the photographs to be a sufficient amount of information to grasp the content being presented. Furthermore several stories such as activities promoting education to children, partnerships and sponsors, workshops, group meetings were scattered throughout the document. There didn’t appear to be categorisation, therefore, became very overwhelming to the reader.

ii. How do these target the organisation’s audience? 

The organisation has targeted the content towards an audience that are passionate or interested in crocodiles. The mistake is that the specific content relates to a variety of audiences within this particular topic. Parents may find educational activities to be a great opportunity to engage their children with awareness of crocodiles; however, the content is buried within piles of information. The two men who had recently passed is important to a variety of audiences within the organisation, it is even more important to know they passed of non-related crocodile incidents to members of the general public. This company is not adhering to a particular audience with their lack of direction; therefore, this is not an effective newsletter.

iii. If you were a science journalist, is there anything you may be interested in following up as a story, and why?

The majority of stories presented in this newsletter are well-written and present factual information that could be of interest to a science journalist following up a story, as the information presented is engaged around crocodiles, which is the main focus of this organisation. The information is referenced, which would enable the journalist to contact further resources.

iv. What do you think is effective or otherwise about this newsletter?

There is very little about the content of this newsletter that makes it effective. The company should consider re-evaluating the appearance of its newsletter. These may be simple changes, such as increasing the number of images and therefore minimising the quantity of text. They may also like to consider publishing a newsletter monthly instead to balance the volume of content.


References

Crocodile Specialist Group 2015, Crocodile Specialist Group Newsletter, viewed 2 September 2015, http://www.iucncsg.org/365_docs/attachments/protarea/34(2-a5b9578f.pdf

Week 6 – Blog

Practical: Take a series of photos (5 – 10) and caption them so that the story is clear from the captions only.

a. Take a series of photos. These can be of an event, or simply ‘a day in the life of’.

b. Caption each photo so that the detail of the moment is captured, and that together, they represent a story to a reader/viewer.

c. Essentially, this is a photo-essay but it is entirely reliant on the captions to build and tell the story.

d. Pay attention to technical detail in your captions.

e. You may use Flickr/Storify or any other platform to build your photo-essay, but you should then link this to your blog.

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Apple & Cinnamon cupcakes.

Thank you for making this possible Betty Crocker.


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Preparation time… muffin mix, ¾ cup water and 1 egg.

Well that seems simple enough?


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Ingredients are combined using a wooden spoon.

Beats an electrical mixer


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Batter is spooned into muffin pan filling.

This is when things really start to get sticky…


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Cook time is about 20-25mins at 180 degrees fan-forced.

It seems like a lifetime when you’re hungry!


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Last step is cooling for about 5 minutes.

Do I risk the chance of burning my mouth because I’m impatient?


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Serve and enjoy!

The moment I have been waiting for…


Inquiry: Review a Cirque de Soleil Media Kit.

a. Visit http://www.cirquedusoleil.com/en/press/kits/shows.aspx

b. Select a show and then review the supplementary media for each show. Specifically, review the Press Kit, which is a downloadable PDF.

Journalists use media kits to support media releases, these contain all the information needed to produce the story (CQUniversity 2015, p. 3).

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I have chosen to review the Press Kit of Totem from the Cirque du Soleil website.

c. Identify the elements that comprise the Press Kit and reflect on how you might incorporate them into a story.

This particular Media Kit consists of 18 pages, containing the following elements:

  • Show Overview;
  • Interesting facts;
  • Critic Reviews;
  • About the writer and director: Robert Lepage;
  • Main Characters;
  • The Scenes/ Acts
  • The Creators;
  • Costume;
  • Set Designs & Projections;
  • Support to the Performance;
  • Village on Wheels;
  • Cirque du Soleil at the glance;

There are a variety of angles that a story can be written. The use of a media kit it to provide all the information in one location. Depending on the type of story being written, will determine what elements are presented to the audience. The business of Cirque du Soleil is to deliver artistic entertainment performed live in front of an audience, therefore, certain information is required which will be presented to the reader.

The use of images is always recommended in a Media Kit to reinforce and attract the reader’s attention. The content will differ depending on the purpose of the story, thus delivering a selection of elements. Behind the scenes information may also be included where permitted into a news story.


References

Cirque du Soleil 2015, Totem press kit, viewed 31 August 2015, https://static01.cirquedusoleil.com/en/~/media/press/PDF/totem/totem-press-kit.pdf 

CQUniversity 2015, study guide lesson 6: supporting the story: packaging and supplementing your writing, COMM11007 Media Writing, CQUniversity, http://moodle.cqu.edu.au.

Week 5 – Blog

Practical: Interview two people and write their speech as a news report:

a. Interview two people you know about one of the following topics: 1) “The things that are most important to me”; or 2) “My greatest passion is…”

I have chosen to interview my partner Jesse Lane and my father Brad Anderson on the topic of “My greatest passion is…”

Notes

Who – Partner, Jesse Lane.

What – Greatest passion is being self-employed.

What – Online business. “No bound by any particular product, niche or group”

When – End of 2016.

Why – Break the 9-5 cycle, build a successful and enjoyable future.

How – “Leveraging other peoples time”.


Who – Father, Bradley Anderson.

What – Greatest passion is leisure time. “The outdoors is my leisure time”.

When – Home. Works in underground mines.

Where – Outdoors: camping, golfing, fishing.

Why – Always did it as a child, relaxing, family or alone time, no headaches or traffic, fun, brings back good memories with parents.

How – Owns own boat, member of a golf club, camping gear and knowledge of camping sites.

b. Write a short news story (posted to your blog) based on these interviews (no more than 500 words).

“Great passions can differ greatly between people. They can be about work, travel or even a person’s hobby and interest.”

Jesse Lane is a 29yo male who works for a Steel company based in Mackay. Brad Anderson is a 52yo male who works in the Moranbah mining industry.

My partner, Jesse Lane said he wanted to own his own online business by the end of 2016. Being self-employed will provide a more enjoyable and balanced lifestyle he said.

Working a Monday to Friday routine is typical for the modern Australian worker, but Jesse has bigger plans for his future. It’s all about “leveraging people’s time” he said.

The online business will aim to sell items that people want or need. “There will be no bound by any particular product, niche of group” he said.

My father, Brad Anderson said his greatest passion is being in the outdoors. The outdoors reminds him of the fond memories from his childhood. “The outdoors is my leisure time” he said.

A rotating roster of five days on and five days off allows for a comfortable lifestyle. Home is spent with family of friends, preferably in the outdoors as well as maintenance around the house and garden he said.

Brad is a member of several golf courses, owns three boats along with all the necessary fishing equipment and visits various camping sites within the region. “I’m the typical man” he said.

Jesse Lane is a young man in the prime of his life, looking to build and succeed his career in the world through online businesses. Whereas Brad Anderson is a middle aged man with many accomplishments looking to spend his days relaxing in the outdoors.

 c. Then take a photo of each of your interviewees and post a photo of each to Twitter with a one sentence grab from the interview 

Please refer to the following tweets in relation to part B.

Jesse Lane

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Brad Anderson

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Inquiry: Find an article that has impact on you because of the sources, speech and reporting, and discuss why it is an example of good journalism or media writing.

I have chosen an article written by the Daily Mercury titled ‘Slide into Spring school holidays with Water Wonderland. 

This article is based on an upcoming event within the Mackay region. As I am a Mackay resident, this article appeals to me. The Daily Mercury has written this article, which is a reliable source. The primary source is Mackay Show Association secretary – manager Steve Gavioli, who provides direct knowledge on the Water Wonderland.

The article also consists of two direct quotes. This is also known as direct speech, which is used to impact a statement or record exact words (CQUniversity, 2015, p .4).

Reporting must be accurate and fair; journalists are bound to the Code of Ethnics (CQUniversity, 2015, p .13). The article is reported around the interest of the new attraction and consumer information.


References

Daily Mercury, 2015, Slide into Spring school holidays with Water Wonderland, viewed 31 August 2015, http://www.dailymercury.com.au/news/slide-in-to-school-hols/2756619/

CQUniversity 2015, study guide lesson 5: voice, attribution and acknowledgement, COMM11007 Media Writing, CQUniversity, http://moodle.cqu.edu.au.

Week 4 – Blog

Practical: Plan for Assignment 3

a. Identify two possible events that you could cover for Assignment 3.

There are two upcoming events that could be covered in relation to assignment 3. They are the Sarina Show held 1 August 2015 or Comedian Dave Hughes PUMPED show playing live in Mackay held 11 September 2015.

b. Plan how you will cover each event. Do some research and write a background paragraph on these events.

Sarina Show is an annual show held in Sarina. This year is the 51st annual show commencing on the weekend of 1st and 2nd of August 2015. An entry of $15 provides a full day of Displays and Exhibits, Stud & Prime Cattle, Ring Events, Entertainment, rides and of course side show alley. The plan is to arrive early on Saturday morning and stay into the afternoon. This will provide an opportunity to engage with the supporters of the shows and interact with the local community.

Comedian Dave Hughes is in Mackay for one night, held 11 September 2015. The date is rather controversial, so I am curious if this will impact his show. Tickets for this event have been pre-purchased, as I will be attending for personal interests. My seating is in the front row so I wonder if I will become part of the show? The entry is $40 and will run for approximately two hours. There is no mention of other comedians except the key talent himself, which I am sure will provide us with loads of laughs. There may be the opportunity to speak with him after the show, but at this stage it is unclear.

c. Review whether you need to get accredited for either event (if so, start the process), because some events restrict cameras. It’s usually not hard to get accredited, so we encourage you to do so if needed.

Sarina Show is a public domain hence there is no requirement for accreditation. However verbal consent is required if I choose to take identifiable photographs of people. Children must have consent from a parent of guardian.

Dave Hughes is a public figure performing in front of a live audience. Accreditation may be required unless given prior consent. Generally photographs are taken after the event in an approved area, occasionally at a cost to the patron. I suspect this event will allow the approval of cameras, such as personal mobile devices. I anticipate this will then become distributed via several social media platforms by these members of the audience.

 d. Identify the main parts of the event

Sarina Show:

  • Major show sponsor: Bendigo Bank Sarina Branch; the most important.
  • Sugar Industry: Canegrowers Mackay; a focus for the Sarina region.
  • President of the Queensland Show & 2014 Sarina Show Girl; interview(s).
  • Agricultural: Farming equipment, live stock, interactive farm animals, cattle best of breed, equestrian events; dog showing, rodeo, poultry & caged birds; chance to engage with local community, farmers and animals.
  • Local talent: photography, arts and crafts, baking, flora & fauna, children’s artwork; purchase, vote and judge, contribute to the locals.
  • Businesses: Lions Club of Sarina, local radio station, volunteer services, local produce, Memphis Moovers entertainment.

Comedian Dave Hughes

  1. Dave Hughes
  2. MECC Mackay

e. Identify the people you will try to get a short quote and photo from/of to record on Twitter

Sarina Show

  • The major sponsors: Bendigo Bank Sarina Branch;
  • Canegrowers Mackay – sugar cane industry;
  • Pig Races co-ordinator Norah Gilmore;
  • Event organisers;
  • Various stall owners;
  • Members of the public.

Comedian Dave Hughes

  • Comedian himself: Dave Hughes;
  • Supporting acts (if any);
  • Audience members;
  • MECC staff members on duty;
  • Professional media personnel.

f. Watch the ‘Why you should plan’ short video on the course website. On your blog, list the three main points from Kate as to why planning is important.

  1. Time: Flies;
  2. Find your schedule and have a plan for what the main events are;
  3. Think about your accreditation, if it is required and be bold.

Furthermore Kate Ames elaborates with 3 additional points as to why planning is important:

  • Research facts and people;
  • Research logistics;
  • Prepare to adapt.

g. You should provide a summary of your planning on your blog.

I have chosen to attend the Sarina Show event. I intend to arrive when the gates open to the public at 9am and commence interviewing shortly after entry. The timeframe is within reason, and I am able to compile a greater collection of material as appose to attending comedian Dave Hughes. Sarina show is also a community event delivering over 50 years of service; and likely to attract thousands of people over the 2-day event. I will also be able to interact with local farmers and community members; therefore expand my social network and public participation. Furthermore, Sarina show will provide various channels of communication that will be used to present stories via the social media platform Twitter.

Event planning Overview/ comparison – Sarina Show vs Comedian Dave Hughes

Sarina Show 2015 Comedian Dave Hughes

PUMPED live show – Mackay

$15 Entry $40 Entry
All day event – 9am to 10pm 3 hours approximately – 8pm to 11pm
Date: 1 August 2015 Date: 11 September 2015
Sarina Location – 30 minute drive approximately Mackay City location – 5 minute drive approximately
Parking available Parking available
No accreditation required Accreditation may be required
Sponsors; Event organisers; Community organisations; Public; Displays; Exhibits; Live entertainment; Rides; Side show alley; Local produce; Agriculture; Animals. Dave Hughes; Staff; Audience.

 Inquiry:Review the following two pieces and respond to the questions on your blog

a. What do you think could be the main issues with this poorly written entertainment news story?:

David O'Neill

Figure 1: David O’Neill         Source: The Sydney Morning Herald (2015)

There are a number of issues clearly identifiable within this news story titled ‘Robert Pattinson talks about his new film, The Rover, with Dave O’Neil’.

  • Poor grammar, spelling and punctuation;
  • Angle: Actor Robert Pattinson or his security guard?
  • Unidentified 5 W’s and 1 H;
  • Blocks of text too large.

Before conducting a review, I researched the author Dave O’Neill and discovered he is an Australian stand-up comedian, actor, writer and a radio personality. I was surprised discovering he was a writer due to the atrocious grammar, spelling and punctuation of his article; which I would have assumed was written by an uneducated amateur. Further investigation revealed criticisms about O’Neill referring to him as a ‘bogan’, ‘yuppie’ or ‘hipster’, reinforcing the illiterate language presented in his article.

Furthermore, the angle of the story is highlighting the security guard more so than focusing on the main interest, that being famous actor Robert Pattinson. O’Neill reveals Pattinson as his ‘friend’ after recently disclosing having only known the actor for a few hours, then proceeds to address his name in a casual state that his fans may refer him to.

In addition, readers will find his article confusing; the main points have not been identified within the first few paragraphs. These refer to the 5 W’s (Who, What, When, Where & Why) and 1 H (How). The information is difficult to navigate consistently with the layout being organised in large blocks of text. The majority of the information is irrelevant and unclear for the purpose of the story. Overall a very poorly written entertainment news story that provides no valuable information or pleasure to the reader.

B) What do you think is good about this well-written media release?

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Figure 2: AgForce Logo                         Source: AgForce Queensland

The following well-written media release titled ‘Drought worst in living memory: AgForce survey’ clearly identifies what you would expect to read in a media release.

  • Good grammar, spelling and punctuation;
  • Angle: overview of the situation, response from a senior representative within the company, and statistics collected and presented in relation to a survey.
  • Identified 5 W’s and 1 H included within first paragraph;
  • Small written paragraphs and sentence structure.

The introduction clearly identifies the 5 W’s (Who, What, When, Where & Why) and 1 H (How) within the first two paragraphs. This is required to engage the reader as well as provide an expectation of the information that will follow.

The angle of the story identifies the issue, being that Queensland farmers are experiencing the worst drought in living memory. In support, AgForce General President Grant Maudsley provides further insight in to the matter whilst also reinforcing a positive approach that will rectify the situation long term. These opinions are presented by regurgitated information and direct quotes.

In addition, results from two surveys were conducted and incorporated into the press release with the use of dot points. Dot points are an effective way to display information that is important however does not require the use of sentence structure.

Furthermore a contact name and phone number have been provided at the end of the article for those who wish to seek further information or directly contact. Overall a very well written media release that provides valuable information and resources to the reader.


References:

O’Neill, D, 2015, The Sydney Morning Herald, viewed 19 August 2015, http://www.smh.com.au/enter tainment/robert-pattinson-talksabout-his-new-film-the-rover-withdave-oneil-20140619-zs99j.html

AgForce 2015, AgForce Queensland, viewed 19 August 2015, http://www.agforceqld.org.au/index.php?tgtPage=news&id=view,478

Week 3 – Blog

Practical: Register a Storify account

a. Register a Storify account using the same/similar professional identity you used to establish your Twitter account.

Please refer to the link for access to my Storify account. https://storify.com/aanderson0111. This public domain will be used for all correspondence relating to COMM11007 – Media Writing.

b. Spend time reviewing other Storify accounts.

Storify is a social media platform that allows users to compile a collection of information in collaboration to one or more topics and create a retrospective story or article. Material is obtained through mediums such as Twitter, Facebook and Instagram, etc.

The domain is a public service, therefore permits any novice to access and reproduce data. Furthermore once published, the author may choose to notify the users referenced. This form of collective research is effective in producing highlights to important information and incorporating different views similar to the related topics.

At first I found Storify to be difficult to understand due to insufficient knowledge of the program. Through further exploration, I was able to navigate with ease and found a variety of topics to research.

c. Identify an issue to follow and compile your first story. It doesn’t need to be huge – just a few tweets.

The issue I have chosen to compile my first story in Storify will be in relation to the Noosa, Queensland Earthquake recorded 30 July 2015. Please refer to the link: https://storify.com/aanderson0111/queensland-earthquake

d. Reflect on your experience on your blog. What seems to ‘make the news’ on Storify? Can you see the usefulness of this as a way to tell stories? If so, how? If not, why not?

There were many topics I discovered that make the news on Storify. I found the variety extended from standard news to current trends and also amateur based content.

For instance, a story titled ‘Live-charting the pretty ugly looking markets’ received 53,574 views that entailed a collection of random tweets and market inflation statistics. This presentation is referred to at hard news, incorporating opinions of the general public through the medium that is Twitter.

Furthermore another story titled ‘Photographer Instagrams four-day stay in North Korea’ received only 30 views. The content was a collection of photographs by photographer Taylor Pemberton capturing the essence of North Korea and compiling a story of his own views and opinions. I would consider this as soft news due to the amateur based content.

My Storify article related to serious news about the recent Queensland earthquake, however the content incorporated humorous elements such as the use of memes that were reinforced by a selection of tweets.

The views per article were displayed publicly which I found interesting, however, this does not appear to make a difference as to what stories are ‘featured’ on the main page. The stories change daily just like the news, so I would recommend checking everyday to keep up with what is trending.

Yes I can see Storify being a useful way to tell stories due to the consistent information in one location. Storify provides a collection of data in one place, therefore additional research is not required. The content is contained in the same vicinity, with the option to link to the original source that may direct you to other or similar versions of the same story.


Inquiry: Review an event or issue of interest to you that has been published in different media – one broadcast, one online, and one print. 

Broadcast

Channel Seven News reported coverage on the reopening of the Mackay Marina breakwater on 23 August 2015. This video was kindly provided by Covered in Chrome member Kirsten Sanfilippo. For those who are unaware, Covered in Chrome is a private membership for people who own classic vehicles (pre 1979).

Leading paragraph is ‘The ribbon cutting made way for a fleet of fancy cars marking the moment locals have been waiting for’. This grabbed my attention immediately, as I am sure it would have to other motoring enthusiast along with the members from Covered in Chrome. Following was footage of these classic cars in action, driving on to the breakwater for the first time, certainly a momentous experience for the Mackay community.

Print

Daily Mercury reported on the events to take place on the reopening of the Mackay Marina Breakwater to be held on 23 August 2014. An image of a local employee was photographed overlooking the famous breakwater.

The leading paragraph is ‘CELEBRATIONS will be in full swing tomorrow at the popular breakwater’. It is clear this article will provide a list of events and activities that take place, encouraging its readers to attend. This occasion will also provide local businesses with much needed supported, and will guarantee a great day for everyone.

Online

Central Queensland News (CQ News) based their reporting on the events taking place on the day of the Mackay Marina Breakwater reopening. Local community members participated in live interviews showing their positive attitude with the event, published photographs further promoted the much-anticipated event.

Leading paragraph is ‘IF YOU haven’t got a boat, the Mackay breakwater is one of the best places in the region to drop a line’. The closing of the breakwater has created a lot of inconvenience to the community, not only to motorist but local fisherman. The reopening and improved structure to the breakwater has provided Mackay locals once again with ability to fish. I dare say it will be months before the novelty wears off. 

Are they different? If so, how?

The news stories share similar content, however the focus remains on specific areas of interest.

Channel Seven News focuses on the event of the opening day, interviewing locals and revisiting the rebuild of the breakwater. The breakwater is an iconic landmark for Mackay; community members will want to be reacquainted and know the reasons and costs associated.

Daily Mercury focuses on the events that will be held during the reopening of breakwater, and encouraging the Mackay’s locals to attend the community event. The discussion is based around the event of supporting local businesses, promoting exercise with the Mackay Road Runners, and capturing the locals interest with entertainment such as Covered in Chrome vintage car convoy, tug boat tours and live music.

Central Queensland (CQ) News focuses on providing Mackay residents with the hard evidence relating to the rebuild of Mackay’s Marina Breakwater. Communities want to know where their taxpayer dollars have been spent and the reasoning for the lengthy timeframe of closure.

Is there a difference in news values? If so, which news values are prevalent in which story?

There is a difference in news values within these articles, despite the fact they have been published in different media. News values differ within various types of news; for instance hard news stories may consist of prominence, conflict, timeliness and impact, whereas soft news stories may be prevalent in human interest, novelty and currency (CQUniversity 2015, p. 3).

These three articles each exhibit the news value of: proximity; which refers to a ‘local link’ (CQUniversity 2015, p. 1). For example, the event is taking place in Mackay and the local viewers are residents of Mackay.

In addition: interest; makes this article newsworthy. As the event in being held in Mackay, the local community will be more incline to interact and personally relate. This particular event may also create a mixture of emotions among long standing residents.

Furthermore: timelines; is critically important. This event is marking a monumental moment for the Mackay community. The timeframe is one day, so there must be a build up to the event, followed by full coverage on the day and finally a re-cap of the past events.

Why does the story interest you?

This story interests me for two reasons; firstly being in relation to the reopening of Mackay Marina Breakwater and secondly incorporating the Covered in Chrome Car Club Mackay. I am a returning resident of Mackay and have been familiar with the breakwaters repairs ongoing for some time. It is a place I love to spend time with my partner, family and friends.

I am also a member of the Covered in Chrome Classic Car Club of Mackay, owning a 1971 restored Volkswagen Beetle. Unfortunately I was not available to attend the reopening event, due to work commitments. This was very disappointing, however, a perfect opportunity to reflect my interest towards the event. I look forward to taking my first drive out there in my bug soon.


References:

Seven News Mackay, 2015, Official opening of the Mackay Marina after years of repairs, viewed 23 August 2015, https://www.facebook.com/groups/744091778978347/permalink/934451389942384/

Daily Mercury, 2015, Locals to celebrate the reopening of Marina Breakwater, viewed 22 August 2015, http://www.dailymercury.com.au/news/marinas-breath-of-life-as-breakwater-reopens/2748887/

Central Queensland News, 2015, Rocking Opening for Mackay’s $18m rock wall, viewed 24 August 2015, http://www.cqnews.com.au/news/rocking-opening-for-our-rock-wall/2749706/

CQUniversity 2015, study guide lesson 3: Identifying News, COMM11007 Media Writing, CQUniversity, http://moodle.cqu.edu.au.

Week 2 – Blog

Practical: Register a Twitter account

a. Register a Twitter account

Please refer to the link for access to my Twitter account: @aanderson0111. This public domain will be used for all correspondence relating to COMM11007 – Media Writing.

b. Identify 20 different journalists (as a minimum) to follow and ‘Follow’ them

Please refer to ‘Following’ listed in my Twitter account.


Inquiry: Review Trendsmap (trendsmap.com) for the top Twitter trends on a particular day. Investigate some of the stories and tweets, and reflect on this on your blog.

1) What are the top stories in your area? 2) What is the relationship between the tweets and news stories in local media (if any)? 3) Can you find evidence that tweets are being used in news stories? 4) Can you find evidence of tweets being used by organisations to promote an event of issue?

Social media has become an increasingly prevalent form of communication, where society has succumbed to the lure of one or more interactive social media platforms. Twitter has become a predominant medium of social networking enabling users the ability to create, share and instantaneously access selected and up to date information via a hash tag (#) link.

The objective for week two-blog activity is to review Trendsmap (trendsmap.com) for the top Twitter trends on a particular day, and investigate various stories and tweets. Due to the lack of ‘tweeting’ activity in the Mackay region, I broadened my search to nearby Townsville.

Trendsmap provides Twitter users with top trending stories within a specific area, through to a broader network. Townsville is a small region when compared to a major city, however  three trends can be found for Sunday, 2 August 2015. These include #townsville, #ufc190 and #bishop. The focus for this blog will aim towards #bishop.

Figure 1: Top Twitter Trends in Townsville #bishop viewed 2 August 2015                                      Source: Trendsmap (2015)

Headlines across Australia today are focused on Bronwyn Bishop resigning as Speaker of the House of Representatives.

Figure 2: Tweet – ABC News @abcnews 2/08/15 4:45pm #auspool                                            Source: ABC News (2015)

Overwhelming backlash received via social media in the days leading to the formal announcement of Bronwyn Bishop’s resignation.

Australian 1/08/15 2:00pm

Figure 3: Tweet – The Australian @australian 1/08/15 2:00pm Submitted a day earlier to the announcement of Bronwyn Bishop resignation            Source: The Australian (2015)

Many Australian’s have taken to Twitter to express their opinions, majority in favour of the decision.

Trendsmap (trendsmap.com) Major trend Australia wide #bishop

Figure 4: Major trend Australia wide #bishop viewed 2 August 2015                                                                                 Source: Trendsmap (2015)

Bronwyn Bishop provided a statement delivering the reason for her resignation.

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Figure 5: Tweet – ABC News 24 @ABCNews24 2/08/15 5:27pm #BronwynBishop                                  Source: ABC News 24 (2015)

Although Bronwyn Bishop is no longer the Speaker of the House, there is still the issue of the exorbitant misuse of taxpayer funds. Some argue she should remain accountable for her travel expenses as they have been labelled ‘outside public expectations’.

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Figure 6: Tweet – Guardian Australia @GuardianAus 2/08/15 7:42pm                     Source: Guardian Australia (2015)

Speculations of the decision for the resignation of Bronwyn Bishop, was self-inflicted. The overwhelming response from the media has shown a conclusive response.

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Figure 7: Tweet – Nine News Australia @9NewsAUS 2/08/15 8:50pm #9News Source: NineNews Australia

It is evident the use of Twitter in social media has a strong impact within the network of news. Utilising the hash tag allows a variety of Tweets to be linked together, providing a direct portal to a variety of news and information via organisations. Readers will then have the ability to access and voice their own opinions in response the event or issue.


References

Trendsmap 2015, Townsville, viewed 2 August 2015, http://trendsmap.com/

ABC News, @abcnews, @TonyAbbottMHR #auspool, Bronwyn Bishop has resigned as Speaker of the House of Representatives, viewed 2 August 2015, 4:45pm, Tweet, https://twitter.com/abcnews/status/627731851407306752

The Australian, @theaustralian, Opinion: Bronwyn Bishop must go and the entitlements system must be reformed, viewed 1 August 2015, 2:00pm, Tweet, https://twitter.com/australian/status/627327922072752128 *change to 31 July

ABC News 24, @ABCNews24, #BronwynBishop has resigned as Speaker of the House of Representatives, viewed 2 August 2015, 5:27pm, Tweet, https://twitter.com/ABCNews24/status/627742563198341120

Guardian Australia, @GuardianAus, Still confused about the existing ruled for parliamentary expenses? Join the club!, viewed 2 August, 7:42pm, Tweet. https://twitter.com/GuardianAus/status/627776417120546816/photo/1

Nine News Australia, @9NewsAus,#9News, Bronwyn Bishop brought this on herself, viewed 2 August 2015, 8:50pm, Tweet, https://twitter.com/9NewsAUS/status/627793498603941889